“202”
FADE IN:
INT. — Kennedy’s Space Center, Florida — Dusk
Scene fades from opening credits and exposition through imagery,
to a group of men in suits walking down a sterile-looking
hallway. In the middle is Jamie (25), light brown hair, gray
eyes, pale skin with many freckles. His walk has more of a
performative walk, like he’s trying to fit in but failing. The
two men sandwich-ing him have a more squared build, indicating
their air of professionalism. They look more refined; the angles
emphasized. Compared to them, Jamie looks like a twig sanded at
the edges, nervously playing with his fingers. The tour guide
ahead of him and the agents is a woman with a bubbly aura to
her. Her hair is short and bouncy, and her dress is a crimson
red color in contrast to her blonde hair.
(Storyboarder note: Bolded letters are for main characters,
italics are for side characters.)
The guide brings them towards an observation deck overlooking
large engines being tinkered with by a multitude of engineers.
Alongside them are others writing and calculating where things
should go.
(Editor notes) In the corner of the screen, the date and time is
typed in. December 3rd, 1958. 6:37pm.
(Tour Guide (F))
Welcome to the observation deck! The work we are doing here is
integral. Our genius engineers work around the clock to make
rockets for the new government funded program to send our brave
American astronauts to the stars! (She exclaims with pride and2
patriotism, her personality a stark contrast to the intense aura
of the workplace.)
(The agents on the tour clap politely. The camera focuses on
Jaime, and the sounds begin to fizzle around as if his mind is
wandering someplace else.)
(The tour guide continues; she walks down the hallway and
disappears around the corner, the agents following, all except
for Jaime. His eyes stare down past the ledge of the deck in
awe. As he finally snaps back into reality, shaking his head to
set his brain straight, he turns to leave. Someone hits his
shoulder, and he falls to the side. A box of complex metal
contraptions falls from the box, and across from him is the man
who dropped it—Sebastian (24). He has shaggy but soft, black
hair that reaches to about the base of his neck. It seemed
slightly unkempt, probably due to a little bit of stress. He had
olive-ish skin and a large, grizzly scar that extended from his
cheeks across the bridge of his nose.)
(Jaime)
Oh..shoot. Sorry, sir…er… Lemme help you with all of this…
(Panicked, scrambling, trying to pick up as many metal pieces as
he could, putting them back in the box, looking between the box
and the scientist.)
(Sebastian)
(He seemed to not want to speak. He grabs the rest of the pieces
in a hurry and speeds off in the other direction, not getting a
good look at Jaime.)
(Jaime)
Hey! Wait! You forgot- (He examines the one left over piece in
his hand. It looks strange. He has no experience with
electronics so he has no idea what this even is.)
(Beat)3
(Jaime)
Maybe I’ll see him later. After the tour… (Jaime looks around
for the tour group, which has fully disappeared by now. He speed
walks with his hands firmly shoved in his pants pockets to go
find them.)
(Jaime catches up to the group and tries to fall back in line
with them while also trying to find the man— Sebastian— with the
box he had bumped into.)
(Tour Guide (F))
And over here are our tireless engineers who work day and night
to put all this fancy machinery together. Give them a big hand,
folks! (With this same peppy, overly patriotic tone as before.)
(All of the tour group claps, including some peer pressured
mathematicians near the engineers. Camera slowly zooms in on
Jamie’s face from below, before cutting to him staring at the
piece of technology in his hand. Cut to black.)
Scene 2 Bars Slide In
INT – Jamie’s Bar ‘Doorway and Keyhole’, Washington D.C. – Night
Jaime sits behind the stylized cozy bar. It has a wrap around
bar that curves up to meet the wall with warm lighting all
around. Some even liken it to old speakeasies the way that feels
homey and comfortable. It’s lit from under the bar and by
gorgeous golden lights hidden somewhere in the low ceiling. A
few patrons are hanging out around this time of night, as it is
too early to bar hop, but too late to be getting dinner.
Sebastian is sitting in front of Jaime and gently swirling
around the amber liquid in his glass, seemingly deep in thought.
No one would think to talk to Sebastian when he’s this pensive
but Jaime knows better. The bartender puts down his glass with a
soft clink and gently throws the rag over his shoulder.
(Jaime)
I have to ask; I’ll bite the bullet. Why do you only order the
same drink when I can make you practically anything?4
(Sebastian)
Why do I gotta have a reason? I like the way you make my
whiskey.
(Jaime)
Alright, sir. Where’d you come from anyways? You’re a bit more
tan than a lot of my regulars. Your regular locale has a bit
more sun than D.C.? (With a tone of jokey confidence, like he
knows something but he’s completely bluffing.)
(Sebastian)
My mom’s family is in Miami. She’s on the older end so I do my
work around her so that I can take care of her. (Slightly
dismissively, almost like it was a practiced response.)
(Jaime)
(squinting slightly)
I get it, I get it— well, I don’t get it, but good on you for
takin’ care of your mom like that…
(Sebastian)
Yeah, I mean, I do get paid a lot for what I do…it takes some
big bucks to pay back the time I put into my degree…
(Jaime)
Yeah yeah, you remind me every time you come back that you’ve
got that fancy degree…(Slowly, like Jaime is slowly putting
something together, finally realizing something about
Sebastian.)
(Jaime fidgets with the piece of metal that he had picked up
from the space center. He had been fidgeting with it since he
had come back from his trip to Florida. He sighed and ran a hand
through his hair— with that movement being one of his recurring
nervous tics— why did he feel so nervous?)
(Sebastian)
(Looks between the metal piece, and Jaime’s eyes.)
Notes: tense music starts playing here to accentuate how both
men have realized something about each other.5
(Jaime has realized that Sebastian is the man from his Florida
trip a month ago, and Sebastian has realized that Jaime is the
man he ran into. The music stops for a moment to emphasize the
tension. For clarity’s sake, Sebastian had come to DC to ask the
FBI if they could check their agents for any of his machinery.
Their eyes lock.)
(Jaime)
…Such strange weather we’re having…Like it can’t decide what it
wants…(His tone has shifted. Now instead of obviously knowing
more than he lets on, he now is purposely not saying what he
knows. He makes sure the switch between the previous
conversation and this one is sharp.)
(Sebastian)
It’s never good weather around this time of year. Half the time
it rains and half the time it’s blazing hot.
(Raising a clean glass)
(Jaime)
(Cleaning a glass without looking at Sebastian.) I mean, I
always come fairly prepared. Pays to stay dry.
(Sebastian)
(Leaning back on his bar stool, a hand on his pocket recording
device) Of course, preparations are the backbone to any good
plan.
(Jaime)
(shrugging) It does look like it’ll rain soon. That’s why I
bring an umbrella.
(It is a completely clear night; not a single rain cloud in the
sky that night. Jaime’s gray eyes flashed to meet Sebastian’s
turquoise eyes, like he’s waiting for something.)
(Sebastian)
You didn’t seem like the type. Most guys like you don’t carry
umbrellas with them. (Speaking in barely disguised code)6
(Jaime)
Neither do you. (Raising a clean glass)To bringing an umbrella.
(Sebastian)
(Raising his own empty glass) To bringing an umbrella.
(The glasses make a little clink sound. The camera then begins
to pan across the bar. It stops right behind the head of
someone. At the opposite end of the counter, sits a tired, yet
well-put-together looking man. The scene cuts to black.)
FADE IN:
INT — Warehouse in outskirts — Midnight
(Scene opens on an establishing shot of the outside of a
warehouse. The area around is desolate and quiet—the kind of
place nobody would want to walk around alone. The man from the
bar stands in the middle of the warehouse, the door slightly
ajar and the camera right in the crack of it. It wasn’t fully
abandoned, as there were still crates of products strewn around.
A ROTARY PHONE’s holder was attached to the wall. It looked worn
down, but it still functioned. He has the phone to the side of
his face.)
(Aleksandr)
Я нашел людей, о которых вы меня просили. Удивительно, но это
было в баре. Называется дверным проемом и замочной скважиной. (I
found the individuals you asked me to. Shockingly, it was at a
bar. Called Doorway and Keyhole.)
(Editor’s note: Subtitles are needed.)
(Camera then switches to follow Aleksandr as he paces around in
place, careful not to tug on the phone line too much.)
(Voice on the phone–Ivan, frustrated.)
И почему ты был в баре? (And why were you at the bar?)7
(Aleksandr, briefly flustered before pulling himself back
together.)
У меня есть много причин для этого. Я уже некоторое время слушаю
их разговоры. Обычно они загадочно рассказывают о своей жизни. Я
заметил, насколько… непоследовательными они могут быть.
Сегодня они говорили в этом… коде. Кое-что о зонтиках и
дождливой погоде. На улице было кристально чисто. (I have plenty
of reasons to be. I’ve been listening to their conversations for
a while now. Usually, they’re cryptic about their own lives.
I’ve noticed how…inconsistent they could be. Today they spoke
in this…code. Something about umbrellas and rainy weather. It
was crystal clear outside.)
(Voice on the phone–Ivan, remaining frustrated.)
Это кажется надуманным… но по какой-то причине Борис доверяет
вашему мнению. Несмотря на то, что это часто… ошибочно. (Seems
quite far fetched…but for some reason, Boris trusts your
judgment. Despite it often being…misguided.)
(Aleksandr)
Извините? Заблуждаетесь? Мое суждение не ошибо— (*Excuse me?*
Misguided? My judgment is not misgu-)
SCENE CUT
INT — A fancy office, sort of gloomy and has a sense of dread to
it.
(The voice on the phone is now shown on screen. The camera is on
his veiny hand, tapping on a mahogany desk that has files and
all sorts of papers with classified information strewn about.)
(Ivan, cutting Aleksandr off.)
Достаточно. Не заходите еще в одну из своих мелких касательных.
Сейчас не время. Прямо сейчас нам нужны полные имена этих людей8
к завтрашнему дню. Я не подведу Бориса ни в одном из немногих
реальных заданий, которые он мне поручил. Мне очень не повезло,
что я оказался в паре с вами для такой серьезной работы, так
что, по крайней мере, попробуйте поработать со мной
здесь.(Enough. Don’t go on another one of your petty tangents.
It is not the time. Right now, we need full names of these men
by tomorrow. I will not let Boris down on one of the only real
tasks he’s given me. I am unfortunate enough to be paired with
you for a job as serious as this, so at least try and work with
me here.)
(As he speaks, the camera moves to his face. He narrows his eyes
in anger, but also pity.)
(Beat.)
(Aleksandr, on the phone.)
Я не могу. Я думаю не так, как вы, и уж точно не действую так
же. Оба эти человека слабы. Я способен выяснить эти вещи.
Поверьте мне. Доверься мне. Пожалуйста, Иван.. (I can’t. I don’t
think the same way as you, and I sure as hell don’t work the
same way. Both of these men are weak. I am capable of finding
these things out. Trust me. Trust in me. Please, Ivan.)
(Ivan, sighing)
Я пытаюсь доверять тебе, Александр, но мы не можем допустить еще
одной ошибки в нашем разведывательном отделе. Они начнут думать,
что мы бесполезны. (I’m trying to trust you, Aleksandr, but we
cannot have another slip in our intelligence division. They will
start to think we are useless.)
(Aleksandr, on the phone)
Тогда дай мне попробовать. Дайте мне еще сорок восемь часов.
Позвольте мне показать вам, что вы можете доверять мне. Что ты
все равно должен мне доверять. Как всегда. (Then let me try.
Give me another forty eight hours. Let me show you that you can
trust me. That you should still trust me. Like you always have.)
(Ivan, rubbing the bridge of his nose)
Отлично. Отлично! Я дам тебе следующие два дня. Но если ничего
не выйдет, я вытащу тебя оттуда сам. Я не позволю тебе там9
застрять, потому что ты слишком далеко высунул свою русскую шею…
(Fine. Fine! I’ll give you the next two days. But if nothing
comes of it, I’m getting you out of there myself. I’m not
letting you get stuck there because you stuck your Russian neck
out too far…)
(Aleksandr, smiling to himself)
Знал, что ты это сделаешь. Потому что ты всегда так делаешь.
(Knew you would. Cause you always do.)
(Ivan, the grit in his voice returning.)
Просто… узнайте их имена, в каком филиале они работают, над
каким конкретным проектом они работают, да что угодно. Всё,
Александр, что может иметь государственное значение. Я доверяю
тебе. И это имеет большое значение. До свидания, мой друг.
(Just…find out their names, what branch they work for, what
specific project they’re working on, anything. Anything,
Aleksandr, that could be of national importance. I’m trusting
you. And that goes a long way. Goodbye, my friend.)
(The line goes dead before Aleksandr can say his goodbyes. He
whispers into the night one small ‘До свидания, мой дорогой
друг’ (Goodbye, my dear friend) and hangs up the phone on the
dial. The night is cold and the warehouse is much colder now.
Since it is only him, he feels that utter loneliness someone
gets from knowing that they have purposely put themselves in
this situation.)
Editor’s Note: Shot composition is a wide shot with Aleksandr
barely in frame as to help the audience empathize with his
loneliness.
The shot follows Aleksandr as he exits the warehouse, hands in
his pockets, whistling some classic American tune he had
memorized. No need to whistle any of the songs he had learned at
home, then he knew he’d never be able to see any of his loved
ones again. And he thought being alone and free in America was
hard.10
INT – CIA Headquarters – Midnight
A light flashes on a console riddled with buttons, sensors, and
dials. The shot follows an nerdy-looking male intern—(18), brown
hair, slicked back with gel, thick rimmed glasses—who gets a
call, gasps, scrawls something down on a piece of paper and
walks all through headquarters in search of someone. He passes
through many rooms and runs down a few corridors before reaching
the office of ‘D. Arsenault’. As the door swings open, it
reveals a sharply dressed man with a gray pinstripe suit and a
clean cut black hair that almost looked too perfect.
The office was a little on the messier side, files in thick
stacks and papers strewn about. Beside the stacks was a fax
machine, its whirring fans lasting throughout the scene to fill
in some ambience. The overhead light swayed as air from a small
floor fan whisking it away from a resting state. The light is
yellow tinted, so it gives the room a nostalgic feel, but also
like there is something definitely off about the one who
predominantly occupies the space.
The nervous intern speeded over to the man and whispered
something inaudible to the man. The man’s eyes go wide. The
intern places the paper gently on the man’s desk. The camera
slowly pans down to show a single word. ‘Soviets.’
(Camera snaps to his face, and turns towards the intern when he
does.)
(Devon Arsenault)
What do you mean ‘Soviets’?!? Explain! (He runs his fingers
through his sleek black hair and stops himself before slamming
his hands on his desk)
(Intern (Steven))
Um- We don’t know where they are, sir.11
(Camera shot from behind the intern, over the shoulder and
positioned downwards to look up at Devon to give him more of an
imposing feeling.)
(Devon Arsenault)
(Putting his head in his hands, rubbing his temples slowly)
Do they actually know anything about what we’re doing?
(For the next shot, place the camera at the far end of the room
to see both of their side profiles. Camera is placed behind a
few stacks of papers, the lens placed to be right in between
them. Blur the foreground.)
(Steven)
(Fumbling with the papers in his arms, some of them falling,
with Devon catching them) I- I mean I don’t think they know but
they’re tailing somebody. We- We don’t know who yet. (He adjusts
his glasses as some of his neat hair falls into his face, it is
obvious that he is very afraid of Devon, he somehow shrinks even
more in the presence of the tall, sharply dressed man. Like a
mino talking to a shark.)
(Camera returns to be a medium shot between the two men.)
(Devon)
It’s…fine. Just put some of the guys on it to find out which
phone line he was using. He had to come from somewhere. Find out
where the Soviets are and…cancel my dinner with my brother. I’m
going to have to stay here to deal with this.
(Steven)
S-Sir, he called earlier to ask. He says that it’s fine if you
don’t come to dinner. All he said to remind you of is that his
birthday is in a week, just to remind you in case you
forgot…he…says that you do that alot. (Messes with glasses
more.)
(Camera focuses more on Devon as he’s writing, panning from him
leaning onto the desk to right up to his face looking down.)12
(Devon)
(Rolling his eyes and picking up a pen to jot down notes to tell
his higher ups. The generals would need to know. The Soviet
threat was real; they would need to be on high alert.)
Anything else? Or are you just standing idly? (Giving him a cold
look. This was a man not to be tested. He had to skip his dinner
with his only sibling because this intern had informed him of a
national threat. He hadn’t seen his brother in months.)
(The camera shifts to face the intern, positioned upward to look
down at him, as if to make him look smaller.)
(Steven)
Oh- Also, I forgot; I’m so sorry sir. The Soviets were talking
about two men in a bar…I didn’t know if that would be
important…(Trailing off, getting very nervous and flustered
under the cold, piercing gaze of his higher up. Mr. Arsenault
was terrifying. He moved like a shadow and spent most of his
time out in the field. The intern idolized the field agents.)
(Camera pans closer to Devon as he realizes exactly who the
intern was speaking about. First, it’s right on the pen as it
drops, then his hands, and then his face.)
(Devon)
(Dropping his pen on the table, his hands going stiff. Two men
at the bar. It couldn’t be…No. No one was targeting his baby
brother. No. No no no. He wouldn’t let them. He had spent long
enough taking care of him that no Soviet was going to take his
brother away. He wouldn’t let them. Actor’s note: slightly draw
out the realization.)What. Bar.
(Camera is now positioned adjacent to Devon, moving closer to
the intern as he speaks.)
(Steven)
(Laughing nervously, scratching the back of his neck. Yup. Mr.
Arsenault scared the life out of him. He was very much
embarrassed by all of this.) Uh- Yeah! They actually did say the13
name. Doorhole and Keyway or…something like that…(The intern
mumbled different combinations of the two words, trying to
remember what the Soviets had actually said.)
(Camera is positioned behind Devon, with the intern in the
corner of the frame.)
(Devon)
(His hands gripped the fabric of his slacks, knuckles white. His
breath was shaky and his fingers were twitching slightly. He
knew it. No no no. The Soviets would not touch Jaime. He
wouldn’t let them. His fingers shook harder before he drew
himself up, took a deep breath and took control of himself. He
did not need the interns thinking he was weak in any way.) I’ll
make some calls. Thank you. Tell Ginny to get me a coffee. I’m
going to be here for a while…
(Steven)
(Slightly concerned. He reaches a tentative hand out but
immediately pulls it back. He knew better than to touch the man.
He looked very terrified for a second. He had never known any
field agent to get that scared. He hadn’t even realized the
field agents felt fear. Maybe Mr. Arsenault knew one of those
men.) Mr. Arsenault…Are you alright? You seem a little shaken…
(Devon)
(Giving the intern a slightly disgusted look. He didn’t like it
when insignificant interns poked their insignificant noses into
his business. He was too high up for them to even be able to be
on the same level. This intern was nothing to him.) Why would
you care? Better yet, why ask? I am your superior. Who do you
think you are?! (He poked the intern’s left shoulder, making the
gangly intern stumble back a little.) What are you even supposed
to be doing right now?! Get back to work!
(Steven)
(Cowering back, it was surprising that the higher ups would lash
out at the intern. He hadn’t really done anything. He hadn’t
thought that basic human empathy would be such an inflammatory
thing. Plenty of the other field agents would smile good14
naturedly and just say they hadn’t had the best night’s rest or
their mission hadn’t gone well or something along those lines.
No one had lashed out before.) Al-Alright sir, I’m sorry. I’m
sorry- (He keeps apologizing as he backs out of the room,
leaving the brooding man alone.)
(Intern knocks into Ginny, a woman with short brunette hair tied
back with a red headband in a pastel blue working dress. He
turns quickly and starts apologizing profusely.)
(Ginny)
Hey hey hey! It wasn’t your fault. You just weren’t looking and
neither was I. It was a mutual mistake. (She gave him a warm
smile. First one he had gotten all day. She has a voice like
Harley Quinn, but she’s far much kinder.)
(Camera focuses on him, and his reaction to her kindness.)
(Steven)
(Running a hand through his hair) I’m still sorry. Also, Mr.
Arsenault wanted me to tell you to grab him a coffee. (He was
still catching his breath from his treatment at the hands of Mr.
Arsenault.)
(Ginny)
(Seeing how meek the intern still looked, linking arms with
him.) Then you’ll come with me. The coffee machine gets so
lonely. So you’re my company now!
(Steven)
(Blushing slightly, laughing nervously. He was still calming
himself down from the time he had just had.) Oh- Ok. I do
actually want some coffee myself…And I do like company…
(Ginny)
(Giggling a little into her delicate hand. She smiled and pulled
him a little closer.) Good thing I’m here then, right? (She
smiles)15
(Steven)
I guess you’re right. Feels a little better not to be getting
coffee alone.(She had bright red lipstick on; it perfectly
shaped her lips. Her lips were plump and her Cupid’s bow was so
sharp. It almost looked like the lipstick was naturally just a
part of her lips. Wait- How long had he been staring at her
lips?)
(Ginny)
(Chuckling, realizing that he was only half paying attention to
her. She yanked him closer to her) Wall. (She smiled, as he
realized that he would have collided with one of the walls head
on because he wasn’t paying attention. At least not to his
surroundings.) Better keep your wits about you.
(Steven)
Sorry- (A few scientists and agents passed them, all conversing
and walking quickly. It was obvious that they were in a hurry to
get somewhere. They had a few blueprints between them. A paper
fluttered out the back that they didn’t even notice had fallen.
The intern picked it up.) The…Venus Project?
(Ginny)
(They had gotten to the coffee machine and with a flourish, she
had put the pot of coffee on the stove of the mini kitchen that
the department had shelled out so that some of the technicians
could spend hours into the wee morning while still staying
awake.) Who knows? I know they’re working on something big. I’ve
brought Mr. Arsenault the coffee he asked for a few times and I
haven’t caught much but I know it’s something a little too
dangerous for either of us. A little too high up for us.
(Steven)
(Leaning against the wall next to Ginny who was leaning against
the counter.) But it’s kinda fun to fantasize. Maybe it’s some
way to make flying cars. Maybe Venus means they’ve figured
something out for the Space Race with the Soviets. Maybe it’s
some weapon, or a new concept for a ship!
(Ginny)16
(Giggling at how into this the intern is getting.) Couldn’t even
guess. The name Venus does give the impression of something
about the Space Race. I know that some of the agents went to
Cape Canaveral a few months ago. They could have figured
something out.
(Steven)
That sounds amazing! The field agents are so amazing..(He
slightly trails off.) Mr. Arsenault seemed anxious about
something. He seemed off after I mentioned some of the more- (He
leans close to Ginny)-classified details about the Soviets I
found.
(Ginny)
(Claps a hand over her mouth) Soviets? You found actual Soviets
in America?! I would’ve thought they’d been too scared to even
set foot on our soil.
(Steven)
(Flapping his hand in front of her face to get her to quiet
down.) Quiet! Cmon, it’s a secret. You’re not supposed to know…I
only told Mr. Arsenault because he needed to know. I’m telling
you out of the kindness of my heart.
(Ginny)
(Rolling her eyes and pushing his face away with a manicured
hand) ‘Out of the kindness of my heart’ (She mocks.) Yeah right.
But thanks, anyway. I love hearing about things, I’m such a
gossip. Got anymore?
(Steven)
I mean…I also know that Mr. Arsenault has made something and
that thing is being held by an agent in the field. An Agent he
trusts with his life apparently. (He wiggled his eyebrows up and
down for added effect.)
(Ginny)
Oooo! Secret weapon made by Mr. Mean… Juicy!(in referral to the
gossip. Not Devon.) (She leaned a little closer, they were only
inches apart, with that warm glow somehow emanating from them.)17
(Steven)
(Leans a little closer, almost closing the small distance
between them. His eyes flicked down to her lips just for a
moment before the coffee machine beeps aggressively, pulling
them both out of their moment. He leaned back on the wall.) I
mean, I could find out other things. Maybe that’s why Mr.
Arsenault was so stressed. Maybe the agent he trusts is in
jeopardy or something. (He shrugged.)
(Ginny)
(Starts pouring out the coffee, gently brushing the edge of her
pastel skirt against his thighs. She gave him a smile that spoke
a thousand words. Most of those words made the Intern blush
slightly. He smiled dorkily and adjusted his hair and she
giggled as she handed him a cup of coffee.) Here. Since you said
you wanted coffee. Made with love.
(Their hands brush slightly as she hands off his coffee and
their eyes connect. Both of them blush a little, their cheeks
brushed with pink.)
(Steven)
T-Thanks. I mean- for the coffee. You really didn’t have to- I
would have made it myself… (He stammered. He didn’t know how to
talk to people. He was always so nervous. Even when he was
dating. He just couldn’t get his nerves under control. He was
definitely not one of those ‘sweep a girl off her feet and kiss
her passionately’. Definitely not one of those guys.)
(Ginny)
(Giggles) My pleasure. Out of the kindness of my heart. (She
gently pecked his cheek and walked off with Mr. Arsenault’s
coffee. She shot him one last tiny flirty look before walking
out of his eyeline.)
(Steven)
(Gently touching the lipstick stain on his cheek. He was
blushing hard enough that her mark was barely noticeable. He had
the dorkiest smile on his face. He tripped over his own feet
trying to get up and get one last look at her pale blue dress.)18
T-Thanks again… (He said to no one, but he felt like he needed
to say it. He would seem ungrateful otherwise.)
(The intern drinks his coffee that Ginny had made him, noticing
that she put a lipstick kiss to the side of his cup. No one had
ever done that for him before. No one had ever been that
sweet…Why was she so sweet?)
INT – Jamie’s Bar ‘Doorway and Keyhole’, Washington D.C. – DAY
Same as before, but now Sebastian is more awake and Jaime is
slightly more animated. Jaime was ranting about something. He is
still fiddling with the piece of machinery he still hadn’t
remembered to give Sebastian back from the earlier scene in the
aerospace engineering building from when they first met. The
atmosphere was warm and happy. Christmas was soon and he was
supposed to see his brother tonight. He really did want to see
his brother, he hadn’t seen him in awhile. He got a call, which
he slid over to answer. His face fell.
(Sebastian)
Hey…What’s wrong? Jaime, what’s wrong? (Leans into the bar,
making sure that he was ok. He had grown pretty close with the
guy. He was cool. He could see himself spending Christmas at
this bar. It was probably just so that he could Jaime sing a
horrible rendition of ‘Santa Claus is Coming to Town’.)
(Jaime)
It’s fine…It’s just my brother…He can’t make it to dinner. Not a
big deal. Big shot gotta do what a big shot gotta do. (Jaime
shrugged to try and give the air of apathy, but his eyes looked
a little more sad than he was letting on. He had really wanted
to see his brother. He will be able to see him next week.
Hopefully. If he didn’t cancel on him again. This one was
cancelation number five.)
(Sebastian)
I mean, I’ll stay if you want company. I’m not doing anything
tonight and you look like you need it. (Sebastian shifted to get19
more comfortable on the stool. He would have to be here for the
long haul, better be comfortable. He turned his head a little to
look at the snow starting to fall. D.C. was always so beautiful
when it snowed. And Jaime was good at making hot chocolate; he’d
even put cinnamon in if Sebastian asked.)
(Jaime)
You really don’t need to, please, if you have anything you need
to get to, I’m not tyin’ you down here. (He put both elbows on
the bar and leaned his cheek on one of the heels of his hand. He
studied Sebastian for the thousandth time. Sebastian’s face was
intensely interesting; he had such an interesting facial
structure. Jaime liked to just sit and study him, like some
interesting painting. He had the piece of machinery in his other
hand, idly playing with it, flipping it between his fingers.)
(Sebastian)
(Looks between him and the piece and then back to Jaime who was
now obviously the guy he had bumped into. This was the guy! The
reason he was in D.C.! This…guy!) You…You have the thing…You
have the thing I need. Give that back!
(Jaime)
(Jaime looked between his hand and Sebastian and back to his
hand and back to Sebastian. Then slapped his other hand over his
mouth. He was just a little stupid.)
(Sebastian)
(Reaching over the bar, slapping him in the back of the head)
Stupid idiot! Jamie Arsenault, you’re so dumb!! Give!!
(Jaime)
(Laughing into the back of his hand as he pulled his other hand
back a little more.) I just have poor memory, Sebastian Muñoz.
(With the same emphasis on the man’s name as the man had put on
his.) Well now you just can’t build whatever you were going to
build with it. (He turns his nose, feigning arrogance.)
(Sebastian)
(Falling back into his stool, a little miffed, before the piece
was gracefully dropped onto the counter. Jaime, with his back20
turned to Sebastian, mixing a drink for a customer who had just
come in, shaking the snow off of his coat, turned to give him a
small wink.) Yeah yeah yeah, don’t be so smug.
(Across the bar, the man was there. The man cast in shadows,
nursing his drink and listening in on all of this. The camera
shot is directly behind him, at his waist, where a gun slightly
sticks out from its holster. The camera switches directly to the
lower half of his face. He smiled slightly. He had gotten the
names of the two men. Cut to black.)
EXT — City Streets — D.C — Night
(Scene layout: dark streets, illuminated by streetlights. As
Devon passed, some flickered above. A couple of the buildings he
passed have a few lights on, but the majority are dark. The road
below is gravelly and makes crunch sounds when stepped on. It’s
slightly windy, causing some street signs to creak slightly as
they sway back and forth.)
(Editor’s note: the tone and color grading palette should be
cool colors.) A continuous shot of the back of Devon Arsenault
and as the shot continues, the camera pans down to him
vigorously and nervously tapping the pads of his fingers against
his pants leg. It is snowing around him but he does not care
(Evident by the snow in his hair that he hasn’t brushed out yet
and the snow on the shoulders of his suit). He starts right
outside of the FBI building and the shot shows him walking to
the Doorway and Keyhole. It snows more and more the closer and
closer he gets.
Right before he gets to the bar, the shot changes to a warmer
setting, the bar. (Editor’s note: it should have its warm toned
lighting slightly more accentuated.) It is from the inside of
the bar with Sebastian and Jaime idly chatting about the
holidays and their separate family traditions. It’s a shot
behind Sebastian as Jaime speaks. Jaime is leaning on the bar
and snatching mints from the bar bowl that he had out. Sebastian
is talking about all of the things his family does and all of
the traditions they have. Jaime is randomly interjecting about
his family and what they used to do before his brother went to
college.21
Once Sebastian begins to speak, the camera’s position is behind
Jaime and it slowly pans to the right as Sebastian speaks.
(Sebastian)
(His earlier words are fuzzy, but then the shot focuses on his
face and the quality is sharper.) I mean, it’s usually alcohol,
but we do use soda when we have little kids. It’s like— (He
mimes drinking out of an invisible boot, which sends Jaime into
a fit of giggles.) Yeah? Yeah! You get what I mean, you get what
I meeeean!
(Jaime)
(Leaning on the bar) Of course I get what you mean; it’s a
glorified college drinking game. We never could do stuff like
that cause I was always too young. (He takes another mint,
unwrapping it and popping it into his mouth.)
(Sebastian)
That, and we cook for days on end. It takes so long just to make
the meat itself, and don’t even get me started on the tamales.
My mamá makes the best ones.(He smiled as he spoke, happily
reminiscing.)
(Jaime)
I won’t; I won’t! My family just makes tourtière. They’d force
me and my brother out of the house so that we wouldn’t mess it
up. We did one year and…it might have resulted in a burn on the
floor of our apartment. We lost our deposit after that.
(Both men laugh. Sebastian goes to say something before the bar
door slams open. He jumps, and the duo’s gaze snaps towards the
doors. Devon walks in, and the mood of the room immediately goes
as cold as it is outside. (Editor’s note: cool the color grading
down as he walks in, but don’t completely wash out the warm
colors. We want to invoke a feeling of unknowingness of the
circumstances, but knowing something is wrong—it needs to look
off.) He approaches the bar with haste, Sebastian almost
instinctively goes for a glass on the counter as a weapon of
defense, before he slowly places it down as he notices Jaime’s
somewhat calmness, like he knew who Devon was.)22
(Cinematographer’s note: for this part, quickly switch shots
between being in front of each character as they speak.)
(Devon)
Jaime. Case. Now. I need it back. And you need to get out.
(Jaime)
(Not making eye contact and starting to clean glasses, which is
another one of his stress responses.) What happened to not
meeting me for dinner? (Not paying any attention to what Devon
said)
(Devon)
I’ll make it up to you. Just give me the case. (He sticks a hand
out, his eyes looking nervously around. He did not want to be
here and he did not have the security he wanted to have but that
wasn’t the problem anymore. He needed the case and he needed it
now. His stupid spoiled brother would not get in his way.
Country over family.)
(Jaime)
What case? Dev, I don’t have any case. What are you talking
about? I really don’t know what you’re talking about. (He
continues cleaning the glass. He wasn’t even being a spoiled
brat now, he genuinely didn’t know what Devon was asking about.)
(Devon)
(Strides around the bar and slaps him across the face.)
(Beat for the realization of what just happened.)
Actor’s Note: Devon would never ever slap his brother so both
men are surprised but Jaime is more so hurt than surprised and
Devon is more so self loathing at his own movement.
(Devon)23
I need the case. Give it to me now. Or else. (He looked very
dangerous.)
(There is a divide between Sebastian and the brothers. The shot
is from behind Sebastian, and the brothers are on the other side
of the bar counter.)
(Sebastian)
(He stood up the moment he did that, reaching over the bar and
grabbing Devon’s wrist harshly and turning him over to look at
him.) Who the hell do you think you are, hitting him like that?!
(He sounded defensive over the other man. He was unaware the two
were brothers, they didn’t really look alike to give the hint.)
(Devon)
His brother. (He turned slightly and he has an air of power
around him, he is not someone to be messed with. He had that
look in his eyes that said that he would not hesitate to kill if
necessary.)
(Sebastian’s glare only sharpened. He would never strike his own
family for no real reason, so the display disgusted him. He
aggressively let go of Devon’s hand, and looked back at Jaime.)
(The shot switches to sit behind the brothers, and Sebastian
looks as if he’s sitting in between the two. His hands are on
the counter and he’s leaned forward, as if he’s prepared to jump
over it to get to Devon if he tried anything else.)
(Sebastian)
You still have no right to hit him like that for nothing.
Brother or not.
(Jaime)
(Clutching his cheek, with a betrayed look in his eyes, not
looking at Sebastian. His full attention was on Devon, he was a
child again. Pouting and crying for the necessary attention and
reasoning he craved.) I. Don’t. Know. What. You’re. Talking.24
About. (His voice was cold now. He really did not like Devon
sometimes.)
(Jaime turns away to go put ice on his cheek but Devon grabs his
left shoulder—to emphasize the aggressiveness—and yanks him back
around. The camera is now focused solely on the two.)
(Devon)
You don’t turn your back on me, young man. I gave it to you two
months ago. You’re going to give it back to me or so help me.
(His voice was full of fire. The kind that burns down cities and
civilizations.)
(As Sebastian was about to interject in defense of Jaime again,
Devon shot him a deadly glare, and with his freehand he reached
for a holster positioned inside of his coat, its familiar
outline slightly emerging from the thick texture. That startled
him. He knew what it was, and what Devon implied. He
instinctively shrank back, a stark contrast to how he was acting
before.)
(Devon put his other hand on Jaime’s shoulder.)
(Jaime)
I don’t know what you’re talking about! Devon, what are you
talking about?! (His eyes started to tear up. He ducks out of
Devon’s hold on his shoulders, tries to run away from Devon,
trips on Devon’s Oxford shoe, falls forward, catches himself on
his hands before his face can hit the ground, making Devon turn
and making the light catch on the case under the bar. Camera
zoom in on the case and then zoom out on the brothers.)
(Devon locked eyes with Jaime, who’s eyes were still misty.
There is a shot of Devon, Jaime, and the case from slightly
above showing the obvious choice that Devon has to make, help
his brother or grab the case. There is a moment of pause, and a
small moment where you think Devon will help Jaime, before Devon
snatches the case and then looks back down at Jaime, whose eyes
are still misty.)25
(Sebastian jumps over the counter to try and help up Jaime,
before quickly moving back as Devon almost kicks him aside. As
Devon observes his act of trying to help Jaime, he begins to
realize he chose his job over his own brother that he came here
to protect.)
Actor’s Note: This is a switch of motives for Devon. Originally,
he came into the bar with the purpose of protecting his little
brother and now his motive for getting the case is to protect
his country and job.
(Devon)
The higher ups will thank you for your service. (He steps over
Jaime, his shoe getting dangerously close to Jaime’s face,
buttoning his suit and rushes out.)
(As he walks out, the camera follows with haste.)
EXT — City Streets — D.C — Night
(A shot of Devon walking out of the bar. The camera swivels
slightly, add some motion blur—
INT — Apartment Building Hallway — D.C — Night
—and it snaps to a shot of him entering his apartment building.
The walls are a little yellowish, but with a dark red tint to
them to emphasize the feeling of looming dread. It is not
entirely bloody just yet.)
(Once he enters his apartment, that feeling of dread begins to
fade. It’s a very homey area—the walls are a comfortable beige
that feels nostalgic, the furniture is not too worn but looks
well loved, and the lights are aged to the point that they make
the room feel like a warm and cozy blanket wrapped around
someone on Christmas Eve. The camera follows him as he enters
the apartment, and we see a beautiful, almost siren-like woman
(30)— pinup model type of body, Marilyn Monroe blonde hair26
that’s in the shape of perfect victory curls, and a blood-like
crimson red dress— standing at a stovetop. She seems almost too
perfect. She turns back to smile at him, with pearly white
teeth.)
(Katherine)
Oh darling! I didn’t know you’d be home so soon! You said you’d
be out for another two days…I would have made you something if I
had known you’d be back…(She flashes a glittering smile as she
walks around the counter and gets closer to him, her hands are
perfectly manicured and her red lipstick perfectly makes her
plump lips pop. Her cherry red heels click on the wood floor as
she eyes him up and down.)
(Devon)
You’re all I need after the day I’ve had today, dollface. C’mere
and give me a kiss. (Devon sets the silver case and opens his
arms with a smug smile on his face, knowing what that look in
her eyes meant.)
(Katherine)
I wouldn’t want to be a bad wife, now would I? (Her heels
clicked a few times more so that now she is only two inches away
from him at most. She ghosts her left hand over his broad chest
and pulls down his tie slowly with her right hand.) Now what did
you say about wanting a kiss? (She cocked her head slightly and
raised her eyebrows.)
(Devon)
You’re horrible. (He chuckles and picks her up, spinning her
around as their lips connect. They both smile into the kiss,
Katherine being the one to pull away to get air and laugh. The
camera is stationed near their faces as they kiss, and shift)
(Katherine)
Darling! Put-(laughing fit)Put me down! The food will burn!!
(She is still giggling as he sets her down gracefully on the
floor. He tilts her chin up and steals one last quick kiss.)
(Devon)
(Winks) That’s because you’re just too adorable to resist.27
(Katherine)
Of course I am. How else would I have gotten you to marry me?
(She kisses his cheek quickly before traipsing back into the
kitchen with a satisfied smile on her face. She proceeds to cook
with such grace. She leans back as she suddenly feels a presence
behind her. She knew it was her husband so she relaxed in his
embrace that encircled her perfectly cinched waist.) You
mentioned having quite a day. Do you want to talk about it?
(The camera is in front of them as they speak, focused with the
background slightly blurred.)
(Devon)
(Groans into her shoulder, planting a small kiss against the
blood red fabric.) It’s just…Jaime and his absolutely horrible
memory. Sometimes I really do hate the kid. He’s just got no
brain. It’s like his head is permanently in the clouds. He
didn’t even know about the case. (He went back to burying his
face in her neck as he usually did to decompress after a hard
day.)
(Katherine)
(Reaching her free hand up to play with his hair, the other
turning off the stove.) What case? The one left in the middle of
the floor next to the door?
(Devon)
Yeah, it’s a work thing though. No need to worry your pretty
head about it. (He pressed a tired kiss to her cheek.)
(Katherine)
You can go get yourself undressed and go get some rest early if
you want— and if you’re sweet enough to give your lovely wife
another kiss, she might turn in early too. (She tapped her rosy
cheek but expecting him to go for her lips. She puckered
instinctively.)28
(Devon)
(He turns her chin and plants a kiss to her cherry red lips.)
I’ll be seeing you in a bit, dollface.
(Katherine)
See you in a bit, handsome. (She held his cheek for just a
moment.)
(He padded into the bedroom, leaving her alone. We get a small
shot of the room from the door. It looks cozy, with a lot of
velvet accents. He shuts the door behind him and we hear a click
of a lock. The camera is focused on this door, before it shifts
to follow Katherine as she makes her way over to the case and
brings it over to the couch; making sure the bedroom door is
locked, she picks up the home phone. She dials in a number
slowly, careful not to make much sound. As this happens, the
camera is placed a little far from her, to seem almost detached.
The mood should begin to darken, as her secretive demeanor and
sudden switch up of pace and action should concern the audience.
She then sandwiches it between her ear and her shoulder.)
(Katherine)
У меня есть кейс. Он кажется намного легче, чем ты говорил.
Посмотрю, есть ли там замок, который мне нужно сломать.(I have
the case. It feels a lot lighter than you said it would be. I’ll
see if there’s a lock I need to break.)
(Ivan, on the phone)
Вероятно, там будет замок, а если его нет, то это просто
облегчит вам работу.(There will probably be a lock, if not, it
just makes your job easier.)
(Katherine)
Я точно знаю, что мог бы выполнить эту миссию сам, но, конечно,
ты должен был послать его. Я знал, что Борис играет в любимчики,
Иван.(I know for a fact I could have done this mission on my own
but of course you had to send in him. I knew Boris played
favorites, Ivan.)
(Ivan)29
(Chuckling) Он не выбирает себе любимчиков. Он знает, кто лучше
всего подходит для этой работы. Александр выглядит и имеет
телосложение американца, поэтому он выбрал его для этой работы,
а не только тебя. (He doesn’t play favorites. He knows who’s
best fit for the job. Aleksandr looks and has the build of an
American man, so he chose him for this job instead of just you.)
(Katherine)
Я правда не могу понять, говоришь ли ты это просто так, чтобы не
спорить с тобой каждый раз, когда меня оставляют на настоящей
миссии. Я застряла в роли домохозяйки какой-то тупой
американки.(I truly can’t tell if you’re just saying that so I
won’t argue with you every time I get left out on a real
mission. I’m stuck being some dumb American’s housewife.)
(Ivan)
Ты читаешь мои мысли, товарищ. И если бы это зависело от меня,
он бы все еще был здесь. Только чтобы тебя позлить.(You read my
mind, comrade. And if it were up to me, he’d still be here. Just
to make you mad.)
(Katherine)
Сосредоточься на миссии, Иван.(Focus on the mission, Ivan.)
(Ivan)
Хорошо. Вы вообще видите замок на корпусе?(Fine. Do you see a
lock on the case at all?)
(She makes a noise of recognition and satisfaction as she sees
that there is no lock on the case. Not even a key code. Too
easy. She squints her eyes and purses her lips. Either a trap or
the Americans were really just that dumb.)
(Ivan)
Судя по твоему шуму, это означает, что нет ни замка, ни кода
ключа, так что это должно быть легко. Откройте кейс.(Judging by
your noise, that means there is no padlock or key code so this
should be easy. Open the case.)30
(Katherine)
Отлично.(Fine.) (She placed it on her couch, the camera zoomed
in intensely on her delicate hands popping open the case. There
is suspenseful music and there is a single moment where the
camera is placed just so that the audience can’t see what’s in
the case but Katherine can. Her eyes go wide.)
(Ivan)
(Groaning softly, annoyed at the long silence.) Хорошо, Кэтрин,
я предположил по щелчкам, что ты открыла кейс. Теперь скажи мне,
что ты видишь. (Alright, Katherine, I assumed by the little
clicks you’ve opened the case. Now tell me what you see.)
(Katherine)
Я…не могу…(I…can’t…)
(Ivan)
Что значит “не можешь”, Кэтрин? Расскажи мне, что ты
видишь.(What do you mean “you can’t”, Katherine? Tell me what
you see.)
(There is a solid beat where the only thing the audience is
seeing is Katherine’s breath starting to get heavier.)
(Katherine)
Я не могу. (I can’t.) (She said more firmly.)
(Ivan, obviously pissed off now)
Кэтрин, просто скажи мне, что ты видишь. Всегда что-то
есть.(Katherine, just tell me what you see. There is always
something.)
(The camera pans dramatically to reveal an empty case with only
black foam. Nothing was ever supposed to be in here. This case
was a fake out all along.)
(Katherine)
Позвоните Александру. Сейчас. (Call Aleksandr. Now.)
(Cut to black)31
EXT – City Streets, road to Doorway and Keyhole – D.C. – Night
(A shot of Aleksandr rushing down the streets, the camera is
focused on his shoes rapidly slamming against the concrete
sidewalks as he practically strides. As he walks, the clink of a
gun and some stray bullets can be heard in his trench coat
pocket. A wide brimmed hat is shadowing most of his features to
the outside world)
JUMP CUT
INT – Jamie’s Bar ‘Doorway and Keyhole’, D.C. – NIGHT
(The camera cuts to Jaime and Sebastian. The silence is
deafening. Jaime is calmly and slowly closing up shop, perhaps
still a slight bit winded/in shock from the previous events with
devon. Sebastian stands up from his (basically designated) seat
at the bar, stretching and preparing to leave.)
(Jaime)
Good night Sebastian. Make sure you make it home safe. Wouldn’t
want you getting hurt out there. (Jaime popped a mint into his
mouth and chuckled.)
(Sebastian)
I’m always safe. Make sure you lock up well. Neither of us need
the stress of you getting stolen from again.
(Jaime nodded and they both laughed. As Sebastian walks to
leave, their noise fizzles out as Aleksandr walks into the bar,
one hand inside of his trenchcoat, thumbing over the barrel of
the gun. Sebastian steps back at the now blocked exit.)
(Jaime)
(Eying around slightly, locking eyes with Sebastian for one
moment, just to say ‘Be on guard. He looks off.’) Sir…I’m very
sorry, but we’re closing for the night.32
(The man turns slowly, moves his hand behind him and closes the
blinds of the door, and locks it. Jaime and Sebastian give each
other a very worried look.)
(Jaime)
Sir…I’m really going to have to ask you to leave. (Jaime walked
around the bar to stand next to Sebastian, easier to push him
out of the way or pull them both down if something happened.)
(The man blocked the exit and still didn’t look out from under
his wide brimmed hat. Jaime’s eyes flicked between the man, the
door, and mostly Sebastian. Sebastian’s eyes were doing the same
laps around the room. He was eying the emergency exits, the main
exit the man was blocking, the bar which could be used as cover,
and then back to Jaime.)
(Jaime)
(He flicks his eyes one more time to Sebastian before speaking.
Sebastian nods.) Sir-
(Aleksandr lifted his chin and whipped out his gun with
precision and speed that gave the other two men little to no
time to even process it to form a reaction. A single gunshot is
heard.)
(Cut to black as the gun goes off.)
THE END